I cannot express how happy I am to be home on a Wednesday without taking a sick day. I love summer! And I know it's Wednesday, but I wanted to post something that I wrote as a little teaser on the QueryTracker site. If you haven't been there, you simply must go now. Click on the little FORUM button on the far right and join the writing forum fun!
This is something I completely made up on the spot for a line that was tossed. We had to use the first few words and then it's free game after that. I have the character in my head--he exists on paper too--and I even found a picture of him already. But that's a whole new issue for another blog entry. I'm thinking about ways to torture him...and this was the first one that I came up with.
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When everyone stared, I knew that I'd broken one—or more—of the insane rules at this place. Maybe it was the rod in my eyebrow. Or the stud in the lower left corner of my lip. Or maybe the facial hair I hadn’t had time to shave because I'd only been awake for approximately seven minutes.
Looking around the cafeteria, it was definitely all three. Every pasty face turned toward mine was hairless, studless, and rodless.
"Mr. Harper."
Fantastic. The Warden. "Yes, sir?" I tried to pour as much confusion into my voice as possible.
"Your shirt is not tucked in."
Looking around the cafeteria, it was definitely all three. Every pasty face turned toward mine was hairless, studless, and rodless.
"Mr. Harper."
Fantastic. The Warden. "Yes, sir?" I tried to pour as much confusion into my voice as possible.
"Your shirt is not tucked in."
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Reading: THE LAND OF THE SILVER APPLES by Nancy Farmer
Reading: THE LAND OF THE SILVER APPLES by Nancy Farmer
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